Walking through the clover
autumn grass and long,
silver as my fading hair,
damp in the dewy morn;
a stirring at my feet
quaking seed-heads, brown and ripe,
a lowly snake,green and cold
tangling at my feet
brushed my sandalled socks.
He had more right than me, so
I stood and watched him
uncurl his slippery coil,
alarming slug and snail,
pushed him with my stick
so's not to hurt the pure complexion;
his attack on me was not offence
he as scared as me.
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- 2009-09-27 @ 15:44:10
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- blckbird
- 2009-09-27 @ 16:01:58
Great Susie
He will be pleased with that !-
- 2009-09-27 @ 17:57:31
Hey!! You're getting really good at using the right buttons for your replies now! Well done blckbird!

Glad you (and our slippery friend) liked my little rejoinder
[[[hugs]]]
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- 2009-09-28 @ 16:35:34
OK, no problem! I'll pm you, it'll be quicker

ravingmad

Soon he'll need to hibernate,
Once again next spring to wake
and slide and slither
through the new young blades
that push up to greet
him welcome from his winter sleep.
XXX Susie