They were there before me
some how out of place
well dressed, watch
and pendant, gold about her neck
careful hair and smiling eyes
blue as I recall, like mine.
I was alone but joined her
for awhile across the café tables
as they read the menu;
looked away when she looked up
so’ s not to seem to stare.
They agreed and so he ordered
She smiled upon his back…..
Never once stopped smiling
heard him ask big breakfast;
her dress belied the menu
his too was smart, no tie,
corduroy pants with slanting pockets
shoes to match his style;
She in blue well cut.
Her smile lit up the room…
for them this was a special day
on their way to some where....
no one ever stays for long.
He asked her tea or coffee
and if a cup or mug,
she smiled again,
her eyes and lips in unison
This was a happy day
perhaps the first of many.
I made my paper last
let them go into the street
followed close behind
before the handle cooled,
saw them to the car park
looked away when she glanced back
So’ s not to seem to stare.
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- 2009-09-19 @ 19:30:31
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- blckbird
- 2009-09-19 @ 19:44:33
Redrose06
Thank you. It happened this afternoon. I have written another from the same little cafe which I have called simply "Love". I see you have lost your dog I shall write on your blog -
- 2009-09-19 @ 20:08:47
A lovely liaison

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- blckbird
- 2009-09-19 @ 20:16:57
laspice
They were a lovely couple they are the second couple who have attracted my interest the other was the tired man with his sick mother. This cafe is interesting in that during the day it is a Kaff at night a sophisticated Italian. I am there most days just to spread my paper and read in peace !This lady was pretty with a grin like a cheshire cat. I bet I know where they will be and what they will be !-
- 2009-09-19 @ 20:29:23
I nearly missed your response as you didn't hit the target again!!!!
I recall your previous poem about the woman and son.
I love people watching it's a good source of 'material'
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- 2009-09-19 @ 20:41:34
I never learn do I? I love people watching.-
- 2009-09-19 @ 20:57:10
You need taking in hand!!!!

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- 2009-09-19 @ 21:37:14
Laspice .....come on then !
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- 2009-09-19 @ 21:39:53
Ah - you can hit the box when you want to!!!

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- 2009-09-19 @ 21:34:19
Lovely. I could see it as I read the words.
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- 2009-09-19 @ 21:48:46
Janeagain.... these two stood out in the cafe..the gold about their persons was discrete less gaudy than cheap baubles he was fortunate and he knew as I would I think he was prepared to earn his good fortune she prepared to have him earn it...such is love -
- 2009-09-19 @ 22:46:50
A lovely poem, that little cafe sounds like a good place to people watch

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- blckbird
- 2009-09-19 @ 23:00:32
It is a very ordinary cafe in a very ordinary town but attracts all sorts these two were out of place.-
- 2009-09-19 @ 23:22:32
You still arn't clicking reply to comment so I didn't get notification you'd replied to me

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- blckbird
- 2009-09-19 @ 23:27:23
I have click reply to comment this time.now have I got it right ?-
- 2009-09-19 @ 23:36:52
By jove I think he's got it

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- 2009-09-19 @ 23:46:19
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- 2009-09-20 @ 16:55:12
Lovely the way you've captured the interaction between them

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- blckbird
- 2009-09-20 @ 17:40:07
Hi ravingmad..thank you. There was something about these two.I guess they were both widowed or divorced..who knows? the big breakfast did not fit in with their taylors ,it was like a childish,naughty thing to do. I caught a sick mother with her son from another nearby table sometime back .....again disappearing into the street,anonymous from another world.-
- 2009-09-21 @ 17:41:18
No doubt they needed the big breakfast to replace energy loss!

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- 2009-09-21 @ 18:24:14
You may be right.........I don't believe I have seen a happier couple.
Redrose06
I think that's a beautiful piece of writing
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